There are some great improvements and other areas which need tweaking. When you are specific with your examples it really strengthens your argument BUT on occasion you still make big broad points with no evidence. Look at your marketing section. They will be looking for you to connect specific marketing techniques with territories and audiences.
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ReplyDeleteThere are some great improvements and other areas which need tweaking. When you are specific with your examples it really strengthens your argument BUT on occasion you still make big broad points with no evidence. Look at your marketing section. They will be looking for you to connect specific marketing techniques with territories and audiences.